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Tying the knot one becomes two frayed we're not pink intertwined with blue don't let it slip away the cut will run deep dyed in array with a natural sweep a needle in a field of cotton soft with a solid feel laying on laps not sodden overlapping the steel painless though pricked dropping blood of sanctity throbbing hearts through conflict clasping pins tangled in humanity embroidered with souls touched by everlasting design I reach for decoration clutched forever to twine

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Date: 2/15/2021 3:46:00 PM
Quite the poetess you are... This is great. Vert mobing verse. Pangie
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/15/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota :)
Date: 1/30/2021 7:10:00 AM
Angela I LOVE this write - absolutely riveting because of its uniqueness - well penned with this entwined embroidered romantic write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
Date: 1/30/2021 6:53:00 AM
yes tying the knot can be both weak and strong, love this poem, its different and intriguing.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, harry :)
Date: 1/27/2021 10:12:00 AM
I love this, especially the last line :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina :)
Date: 1/27/2021 3:31:00 AM
A poem that has romantic overtones. So well written. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Victor :)

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