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Love the Lord - the Hotan Style

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~Love The Lord~ (Hotan) Love Lord with all heart His presence feel day and night Hear His message heed His call He loves us He's not far away When we fall He's right beside us When troubled He hears our prayers He lifts our spirits each day and night. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2013
March.18.2016 ~Author's Notes: The " Hotan " is a Japanese syllabic poem of nine unrhyming lines, the Hotan gets its name from it's syllabe pattern, being a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).

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Date: 3/18/2016 10:32:00 AM
you move me with such tender impressions, dorian.. so fitting for this lenten season; so redeeming!..huggs
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Date: 10/14/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly,Nette, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:) I apologize for the very late reply but I've been extremely, very busy this year.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

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