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Love Takes Time

future in2past neva bk we flow accordin 2tym, aidn the paths of our lovestruck tears to run dry, so i bicker wt emotion denying the fact that it dies,continuosly cryin askn maself why? why has...wt ws once a florescent dream of eternal kisses & hugs faded away wt the flawed depth of our love,i mean... personifying this vivid emotional rollercoaster as the night-dark, u'll find u'll arise wt eyes visualizing more den fragments of ur broken heart, but along wt da timid enlightenment 4rm da morning greetings of ur experience... Rise & Shine...you see,last nyt wen u fell deep in ds love u closed ur eyes& denied that mornin-lyt wud arise...&nw dt i visualize love az time & clocks as u&i... inma eyes the tickn has stopped timing &we both arise enlightened by the sounding alarmz of more than we can envision... shadowed by blind ignorance,love izda quick-sand of understandn dt no-man cn sink in, a beauty dt no grammatical expedition cn justify wt description... a wild rose bush that no double-edged samoria sword cn trim... bottom-line,she is dt window of emotion dt no black-tainted hurt cn tint &if u feel wt i feel,den fear nt cz nw ironically we can see through her clearly... she's dt freeway wt no limit-to-speed, enticing bt the faster you go logically the nearer the end of the path will be... &if ur not blessid enough to understand,den ur but a butterfly wt one wing,a bird dt cant fly, a choir dt cant sing_without love ur simply but a pendulum dt cant swing... until ur logic ripens & the clock stops ticking... &u are awakened by the morning greetings of ur experience... den u Rise&Shine... enlightened by more than u can envision,love takes time...

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Date: 1/19/2016 7:09:00 PM
enjoying this one a second time. skat
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:20:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Rakatsa :) - I choose your first very great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2014 9:51:00 AM
Hi Rakatsa , your first poem was enjoyable. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/30/2014 10:22:00 PM
Rakatsa,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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