Love Stuck

~Love St(r)uck~ Desperate Susan cannot budge from lovers’ bench stuck with superglue ------------------------------------- Contest: Picture Perfect Haiku #2 Sponsor: Skat A Placed 2nd

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/15/2016 9:52:00 AM

I love your haikus tooo... They are very insightful ! 7/7 Hugs red

Paul Callus
Date: 3/15/2016 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Red:) I like haiku, though to be honest this one is more of a senryu than a haiku! Your top rating is appreciated:) hugs // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 11/19/2015 10:15:00 AM

This is cute and creative, congrats on your win! -lu xxx *smiles*

Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2015 3:08:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed this one, Laura! Appreciate you delving into my past poems:) Thank you. Had a perfect visual to go with it, but I see that it's now disappeared; must find a new one! Warm regards:) // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2015 3:38:00 PM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 7/14/2015 4:30:00 PM

Thank you for reading and enjoying, Sara! All the best. // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 7:29:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 4:24:00 PM

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting, Funom. All the best. // paul

Constance La France

Date: 7/4/2015 5:36:00 PM

Paul, funny fun haiku 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2015 4:39:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Constance:) Thank you, and have a lovely Sunday! // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/27/2015 6:39:00 PM

Very nice pen Paul! It made me smile:) A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/28/2015 3:28:00 AM

Thank you, Dorian. I appreciate your lovely visit and the high rating. A happy Sunday to you:) // paul

Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2015 9:55:00 PM

I enjoyed this humorous haiku ...Congrats on a great win Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 6/27/2015 7:07:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Joseph. Thank you and have a nice day. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:28:00 PM

coming back with a big congrats, Paul. See ya next week if I'm able!!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/26/2015 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Family comes first. cu and take care. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/25/2015 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your high placement with this humorous haiku Paul. Haiku and picture fit perfectly!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/26/2015 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Connie:) I was lucky to find a fitting picture, after I posted the poem; there are times when pictures do give us a helping hand! So glad you enjoyed. Keep well:) hugs // paul

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/25/2015 10:17:00 AM

Ha ha.......I am sure this happens often !!! What a fun poem !! Congratulations, Paul !

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2015 4:59:00 PM

I'm glad that I achieved I what I set out to obtain....smiles and laughs:) Thank you Carrie! // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/25/2015 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on win ~ You made me smile with this humorous piece on being 'Love Stuck' ~Delice

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2015 4:55:00 PM

Thank you Delice! This happens to be the first fun haiku that I've written! Glad it elicited a smile or two:) // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 7:36:00 AM

"A smile has no price"??? Darn I was hoping to sell a million! Congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2015 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Richard! People like us donate real smiles, for free:) // paul

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/25/2015 6:16:00 AM

Congrats, Paul, on your high win! You struck a winner. Love will do that.~~Darlene

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2015 6:47:00 AM

Thank you Darlene! Love can be all powerful...even to the extent of leaving us in sticky situations:) All the best. // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/25/2015 2:45:00 AM

Paul, I had a feeling this haiku would do good in the contest. Congratulations on your win:) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2015 5:33:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis, for the faith you had in my fun haiku, and for the congrats. Have a nice day. // paul

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:25:00 AM

Paul... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2015 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Skat!! This result is beyond expectations! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/23/2015 7:40:00 AM

hahahhaah :D! Dearie Paul, love your haiku!!! im sorry Im so late to reply!! still am busy with some things just manage to steal some time.. :(! I will reply on your e-mail soon! Rest assured am doing better and better just so busy.. :(! hugs and hugs!! Im trying to cope with all but am doing better!! ~Olive ELoisa

Paul Callus
Date: 6/23/2015 9:20:00 AM

It is lovely to hear you laugh, Olive_eloi:) Never mind being late; first things first:) take your time...knowing that you're doing better is already great news! You have never been one to throw in the towel:) Many hugs...paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2015 3:11:00 AM

- I do not often read a funny Haiku :)))) - Well done Paul !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/23/2015 9:04:00 AM

Neither do I Anne Lise!:) but I think that the sponsor must have been looking for some fun, so why not be part of it:) Hugs // paul

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 6/21/2015 9:47:00 PM

Lol thank you for the laughter.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2015 3:50:00 PM

It's lovely to see laughter lines on your face, Njeri:) Thank you for stopping by. // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 6/21/2015 2:32:00 PM

Haha... oh poor girl to ruin her good shorts. :~) a 7 and a win to me... Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 6/21/2015 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Eve; pleased that you got a laugh out of it. Appreciate the faith you show in it:) hugs // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2015 1:48:00 PM

for a while, you had me giggling,paul... witty, downright hilarious.. where's the guy,lol.. huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 6/21/2015 4:34:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Nette; a smile a day keeps the wrinkles away:) as for the guy, he said he was going to get a pair of scissors! hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/21/2015 4:43:00 AM

Interesting and funny haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Paul Callus
Date: 6/21/2015 5:11:00 AM

Glad to have you stopping by, Ravi. Thank you for reading and commenting. All the best. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/20/2015 9:51:00 PM

Thank you for this hilarious haiku that had me grinning. Have a good night's rest and best of luck in the contest! Pandita

Paul Callus
Date: 6/21/2015 4:10:00 AM

Thank you Pandita:) Slept an hour extra today...father's day...so was up at 7! Have a lovely Sunday! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2015 6:27:00 PM

hahaha. a funny haiku, my friend!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2015 6:38:00 PM

You caught me right on time, Andrea...my last comment for the night; 1.36am and time for my zzzzzzzzzzz. Thank you for stopping by:) // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/20/2015 12:42:00 PM

Paul,this is funny. Looks like she won't be leaving anytime soon. Good luck in the contest:) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2015 3:20:00 PM

She is spellbound! Love your comments, Alexis:) Thank you! Regards...paul

Aiyah Torres

Date: 6/20/2015 10:52:00 AM

hope she moves on... this is so funny ,Paul :O))

Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2015 3:17:00 PM

Eventually something must give...doubt if it will be the bench:) Thank you for reading and enjoying! hugs // paul