Love Story 1

Lost in your eyes of gold. Our hearts are one. Like a box and key, our souls are complete. Never thought that our love would end like this. My heart shatters my loves weak. My last Plea.

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/13/2011 6:39:00 PM

Cory....back to your tetra...you have obviously written many of these b4...this one flows so smoothly....thanks for reading mine and commenting. Hey, is it true the report on BBC that Shakespeare's name may be removed from many of his works bc he wasn't the true author? I figured you'd have the inside scoop. Ps...seen his ghost lately? I find it fascinating your connection with him...lol.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/12/2011 7:40:00 PM

this rocks, cory!! I worked on this contest entry 3 different times and ready to throw in the towel....love this box and key making a complete soul connection. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2011 12:06:00 AM

Nicely done for the double tetractys contest, Cory!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2011 8:23:00 PM

intense and dramatic cory.. lovely romantic expressions. my friend. good luck in the contest buddy.. things going well? your poetry is ...