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Love Speaks With Silence

Hush, Hush my dear child stillness wakes as you cry silent night the stars fly by darkness releases the clouds comply Soft winds blowing with quietude while your nestled on my chest so tranquilized your soft breath gives silence a beatitude for my child you are my paradise A love of two forever quite serenity. T Reams copyright 2015

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Date: 11/11/2015 8:31:00 AM
I could see the mother with the child nestled upon her tender chest..Enjoyed reading t his one..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I was not sure if that was what you wanted or not so I just tried to write one..Thanks for the challenge..Sara..Thanks for dropping by to let me know..
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:59:00 AM
Thank you very much for the great comment Sara.
Date: 10/18/2015 12:26:00 PM
What a very lovely compelling piece! I remember those exquisite moments that are forever embedded in my heart! Excellent write, Tammy, that I enjoyed reading! Pandita
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind words Pandita.
Date: 10/18/2015 6:57:00 AM
Beautiful, those are the moments to hold on to. :)
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Casarah for the nice comment. Memories never lost. Have a great day.
Date: 10/18/2015 6:15:00 AM
Hi Tammy. A sweet lullaby you have shared with such a wonderful flow of love, comfort and safety. Very much enjoyed it.... Robert.
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for the sweet comment Robert. Have a great day.
Date: 10/18/2015 4:01:00 AM
This is serene, lovely and melodious, Tammy. Even in free verse you can't help inserting touches of fitting rhyme; it gives the poem a smoother flow. ~ All the best // paul
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comment Paul. Have a great Sunday.
Date: 10/12/2015 2:00:00 AM
Really nice poetry Tammy, Enjoyed all the lovely words you put together Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:16:00 AM
Thank you Kevin. Have a great weekend.
Date: 10/11/2015 9:39:00 PM
What a loving relationship between you and that special child. A loving bond.
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:15:00 AM
Thank you Michael. Sorry I'm late in responding.
Date: 10/11/2015 9:37:00 PM
Tammy, I enjoyed the beautiful flow of this piece. Such heatfelt words expressed to your child. Great job! :-)Alexis 7
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:15:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. Have a wonderful weekend.

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