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Love Speaks

At the gloaming time of day When red sun has set Against silhouetted hills One of eve's asset Is when Swans touch beaks White against dark_romance sparks Veils lift, heart now speaks
Inspired by Nette's contest Not an entry...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/13/2014 8:25:00 AM
Sara This is such a loving and heart felt write. So beautifully written in a soft and sweet way. Thank you for the nice comment on my Futures In Your Heart poem.
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Date: 11/2/2012 5:19:00 PM
Beautiful picture you have painted on this electronic canvas.
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Date: 10/7/2012 4:29:00 PM
nice,,,,, very nice Sara ;}
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Date: 10/3/2012 9:51:00 AM
nice picture...enjoyed reading your poem friend Sara. have a nice day!
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:10:00 AM
sounds great babe...we have the black swans down this way....
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:10:00 AM
Very beautiful..the gloaming is the favorite part of my day. It is when everything starts to slow down and day transitions to evening. Thanks for reading my work!
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:13:00 AM
Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am starting to read what looks to be some exceptional writing this morning. So glad I was able to read yours Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:07:00 PM
Its funny how we have a tendency to affiliate privacy, intimacey, and even truth & secrecy with darkness, or at least nocturnal gallivanting - romantic Sara - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:16:00 PM
A beautiful write Sara xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:22:00 PM
Wow, this is a fantastic write...you really should enter this into Nette's contest, that is if you don't have a better one! You did excellent with this form, it's as if your were born to write with this form! I love the material of which you wrote about in this poem my friend! Your title said it all, it completed the piece! Fabulous write, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:08:00 PM
Sara; this is beautiful. When love speaks, we should listen. Thanks for sharing. Lucy
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Date: 9/30/2012 9:11:00 AM
this is beautiful..:))))))
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