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Love Song To My Rose

"From deep within my heart I always catch the scent of my Beloved. How can I help but follow that fragrance?" By Rumi I am a bee, a little bee. The lovely blossoms beckon me. They smile and wave; they wave and smile, and though I linger for a while, ‘tis you, my dear, my precious Rose - the one that long ago I chose - to whom I gravitate. Your scent entices me, and my descent will be where I can see your face. Long may I stay to feel your grace and nectar of your essence drink, my pretty flower blushing pink. Sweet Rose, you know I love you so - I'll come to you in sun's warm glow, and when the night descends on you, in light of moon I'll see you too. July 17, 2022 for Sotto Poet's Rhyme Rumi Quote Poetry Contest 113 Words by Word counter

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Date: 8/28/2022 6:09:00 PM
Andrea, fantastic writing, I love it! Best of Wishes, William
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Date: 8/22/2022 4:30:00 PM
Really lovely Andrea, content rhythm and rhyme all fabulous… Belle
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Date: 8/22/2022 5:11:00 AM
Andrea, this is so stunning~so delicate and yet so powerful. Congratulations on your win in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 8/18/2022 2:13:00 PM
So beautiful, Andrea. What a great idea to use a bee and a rose! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 8/17/2022 1:56:00 PM
Andrea, a lovely poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 8/16/2022 4:06:00 AM
Somehow in my readings I missed this winner. Way to go for the contest's big win. Congratulations~~ Sara
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Date: 8/15/2022 11:26:00 AM
Lovely! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 8/14/2022 8:06:00 PM
You must have some Persian blood... Congratulations... You do know that Rumi was my Great great great great great great great great great grandfather...
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Date: 8/14/2022 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Date: 8/14/2022 4:18:00 AM
A beautiful write, so imaginative and pure :) congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea
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Date: 8/12/2022 9:42:00 PM
I adore this gorgeous winning First place poem Andrea. Congratulations on your deserving win. This is going into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/12/2022 8:26:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful. Congratulations on your top win..Blessings. ^__^ JCB
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Date: 7/30/2022 7:50:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Andrea and in perfect rhyme. What a lovely poetic love song! A big fave for me! Best wishes in the contest and thank you for visiting my page today. Cheers my firend :-)
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Date: 7/24/2022 9:00:00 PM
This is beautiful indeed ! Love this little bee's hum of love to the sweet rose ! All the Best Andrea !
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:43:00 AM
A beautiful song of love, perfectly inspired by Rumi quote. To my Faves, Dear Andrea.
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Date: 7/20/2022 7:13:00 AM
Such a beautiful love song with nice rhymes dear Ria... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/20/2022 6:56:00 AM
A sweet song to a rose in poetry instead of prose. The romantic overtures had me on my toes, wishing I was like a rose. :-) I liked the poem, the rhythm and rhyme. Read like a winner to me, my dear friend Andrea. Smiles and Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/19/2022 11:38:00 PM
Andrea, This is a lovely haunting lyrical write.
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Date: 7/18/2022 11:58:00 AM
aww, a beautiful write here, my friend. Thanks for the places in your contests
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Date: 7/18/2022 7:29:00 AM
Very nice Andrea. Well written. :)
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Date: 7/18/2022 6:00:00 AM
Much enjoyed the song of symbiotic relationship you wrote, Andrea. Best to you.
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Date: 7/18/2022 5:26:00 AM
Great flow here dear Poetess, rich in sentiment An asset to any contest.' Win big with it!
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Date: 7/17/2022 7:47:00 PM
This is enchanting, Andrea! It's a fave for me. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:25:00 PM
An amazing and lovely poem, love it Andrea, as for my senryu, you asked my best friend, its the title Andrea, Stay safe, Harry
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