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Love Song

Raindrops making music Beating on the lovers` heads Singing a melody of love Soothing and sinking into their hearts Wafting across the vastness of their chests Making them vibrate with amazing cravings Their heads basking in the sunshine Of the present and the future of togetherness

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/1/2015 10:02:00 AM

lovely poem Ndaba hugs 7

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:32:00 AM

Thank you, Shadow.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/31/2015 10:44:00 AM

Lovely write on love....may your own song beat forever strong. Hugs

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:33:00 AM

Thank you, Cecilia.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/28/2015 7:42:00 PM

I love this beautiful piece of yours. Excellence......A.M.

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, Afolabi.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/26/2015 8:52:00 PM

Lovely!

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:35:00 AM

Thank you, Richard.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2015 4:22:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic poem, Ndaba! I truly enjoyed. #7 // paul

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:37:00 AM

Thank you, Paul.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/10/2015 11:06:00 AM

wonderful poetry, love th visual you create

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, Harry.

Lebogang Monyela

Date: 7/6/2015 7:22:00 AM

I read a few of your poems Sibanda and gosh am I not impressed! You are such a great writer and this love song, is a song I'd love to sing over and over again! Great poem!

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, Lebogang.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2015 12:24:00 PM

enticed by this captivating melody of nature, nbada.. well done!.. huggs

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:40:00 AM

Thank you, Nette.

Emilia Lasarus

Date: 6/29/2015 9:10:00 AM

I love this lovely love song :)

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:41:00 AM

Thank you, Emilia.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/28/2015 4:12:00 PM

What a stunning write, you painted this with vivid imagery, and wisely. Excellent.........7!..........A.M.

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:44:00 AM

Thank you, Afolabi.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/28/2015 2:13:00 PM

- A lovely love poem, Ndaba (7) - You know ..... I write a lot about love myself :) - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/1/2015 11:45:00 AM

Thank you, Anne.