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Love Song

heres a little bit of a song im working on. just two little words i do would make me the happiest man in the world, and id prove my love for you to show every one that your my girl, cuase i know you know i love you. thats all i got ha let me know what you think :) and any tips would be very welcome.

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Date: 2/5/2024 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:13:00 PM
peter, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 11/26/2013 10:33:00 AM
Peter, love it! love my favorite subject.. hope to see the whole song... SKAT
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Date: 11/3/2013 9:24:00 AM
A cute confession of love through poems.
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