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Soft ripples, carried on Gentle piano caresses- Tilt my mind towards Happy times, filled with Feather touches in my memory Like a pleasing smile, Received from a loved one- Warming every recess of my soul 02/25/12 6:20am © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/29/2012 4:00:00 AM
"gentle piana caresses" "feather touches in my memory" "warming every recess of my soul" 3 wonderful lines - they say it all - Shaz
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Date: 4/27/2012 9:34:00 AM
GENTLE PIANO CARRESSES. I LOVE IT.
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:32:00 AM
What a beautiful write dear poet ! I can just vision you at the piano, gently touching the keys, and whispering the lyrics James ! Awesome...to mine favz if'n ya don't mind sir !....much love, james
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Date: 4/9/2012 7:16:00 PM
Wraps me in fuzzies James, I need that warmth you speak of and find it right here in your poem. So nice!
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Date: 4/4/2012 8:02:00 AM
So very beautiful the memory of love and tender sweetness..lovely
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Date: 3/17/2012 9:52:00 AM
Good morning, James, very beautifull "HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)
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Date: 3/2/2012 3:52:00 PM
I love the "feather touches in my memory..." A beautifully soft and gentle poem. James! Thank you for your comment on my " March of the Barefooted". Best, iolanda
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:06:00 AM
Lovely and soft poem, well done James. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/28/2012 1:16:00 PM
Touching and sensitive... Great write.
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Date: 2/27/2012 10:32:00 AM
So soft and beautiful theses words..
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Date: 2/25/2012 8:44:00 PM
sweet memories we find, in the recesses of our mind. lovely pen jim.
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:34:00 AM
Really enjoyed my read here James thank you , Declan ...
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