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Love Senryu Collaboration With Leolee

Love your tender touch Lay your body next to mine Let our love evolve Stay with me tonight I can’t get enough of you Stay here forever Magic is the night The sweetness of your kisses Awakens desires Let’s get intertwined We can’t be separated Together always. A wonderful love That we have for each other I hope it will last Tonight together Too few hours in the night. Let’s spend it wisely Several hours Before the sun comes up again We’ll do it right now. Moments of pure bliss We are sharing this moment Please time, move slowly
First four written by Leolee Last four written by myself

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/29/2012 3:14:00 PM
Very nice string of senryus, Robert. Good collaboration. Congrats on your win. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:10:00 AM
wow Robert ..congrats on a great win and collab... awesome words about love..my fav subject.. spectacular one..
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:00:00 PM
Wonderful poem you did with Leolee. Congrats, and tell her a big congrats from me!!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:37:00 AM
Robert and Leolee congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:15:00 AM
Love your romantic collaboration!! Congrats to you both!!
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Date: 1/27/2012 12:59:00 AM
ROBERT, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:50:00 PM
I asked who Leolee is because PD has a collaboration contest with folks outside of Soup being our co-writers!
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/16/2012 10:12:00 PM
I submitted this in PD's contest.
Date: 1/16/2012 5:49:00 PM
Ahhhh yes, and this reminds me of a sonnet I once wrote about cruel time moving too quickly on a light like this one. Who is Leolee?
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/16/2012 10:14:00 PM
The poem I wrote for Leolee is "A New Baby in Australia". Check it out at your convenience.
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/16/2012 10:11:00 PM
Leolee is somebody I met on a now-defunct poetry site. She is registered with poetrysoup, but has no submitted works. She registered to see the poem I wrote about her granddaughter.
Date: 1/16/2012 2:27:00 PM
Lovely co write : )
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Date: 1/15/2012 11:17:00 PM
ROBERT... MAY I ASK IF THIS IS FOR MY CONTEST.... I SURE HOPE SO.... AND IF IT'S NOT..PLEASE ENTER IT...LOL... AND IS THIS LEOLEE... FROM THE SOUP.... A VERY SMOOTH POEM..LOVE IT..P.D.
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