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'love Remain'

A pale light tussle the dark minuscule spaces lit up- friendship starts with a smile Solitude chased away and love remain 11th place in Parise Pariku Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise © All Rights Reserved Dec 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/7/2011 4:36:00 AM

Congrats Wilma on your well deserved win in Rick's contest!

John Freeman

Date: 1/7/2011 3:05:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/6/2011 9:02:00 PM

I love this, Wilma...love your take on the contest! Congratulations on your deserving win! Love, Audrey

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2011 8:52:00 PM

best of cheers for a great win in the contest… just lovely! : )nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/6/2011 7:59:00 PM

Beautiful Wilma.Many congratulations for this super success.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2011 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/6/2011 4:25:00 PM

Love this!! (Especially the third line....just wonderful !!) congratulations, Wilma!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2011 3:27:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy another successful win with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on the 11th place win in the contest of Rick, Wilma

Rick Parise

Date: 1/6/2011 2:13:00 PM

Beautiful!~Congrat on your 11 th place VICTORY!!!!!!!!!!~rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2011 1:45:00 PM

Congratulations to you, Wilma. Glad to see you on the winner list, down here by me. heehee. Luv ya, Andrea

Paul James

Date: 12/29/2010 2:17:00 PM

The idea of a 'pale light tussle' is superb, very evocative as a whole,too.

James Fraser

Date: 12/25/2010 7:23:00 AM

Nicely written, many a freindship has been started with a friendly smile. Another little joy, written by another joy....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/24/2010 8:35:00 AM

Powerful lines Wilma my friend.. that last line is true for most every phase of life..friendship is very important... luv more so ... starts with a sweet smile too.. enjoy Christmas Eve and Day with luv and blessings..too...

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/23/2010 7:21:00 AM

Such truth Wilma. A warm smile can truly chase loneliness away. I enjoy this so...Lay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2010 6:16:00 AM

Aweseome, WIlma! LUv, Andrea