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Love Pure and Blind

The love is pure The love is blind It is the feeling Which you cannot hide. The one you love is your moon And you there for them from morning to noon You want your love But dnt know how to disclose. You miss them every minute And wanna listen their every pinnate Your live is true But dnt wanna proove. Your love is your best And you wanna feel the heat Your heart is not with you Because you want your love to be near you. Your love is pure But you don't wanna conquer You want to get sank But want a love which is Frank. -Disha chaturvedi.

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Date: 6/23/2016 10:42:00 PM
Dish, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/17/2016 12:45:00 PM
- Very well written and lovely poem, Dish - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // Sun :)
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Dish Chaturvedi
Date: 6/19/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thnku so much..
Date: 6/16/2016 11:22:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Dish. :)
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Dish Chaturvedi
Date: 6/16/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thnku so much for such warm welcome...I always wanted a platform like this.
Date: 6/16/2016 6:27:00 AM
Dish, this is a tremendous way of sharing your thoughts, I'm so pleased, to read your very first post. Skat
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Dish Chaturvedi
Date: 6/16/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thanks a lot...

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