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Love Power Anatomy

There is a body stronger than the flesh alone it is the body of your love, that temple built of desire's stone quarried from the chaos of your erotic emotions, shaped by destiny's moan, where neurotic nerves, psychotic passions, fanatical faith and romantic rose chrome are imported from the four corners of your heart, brought to the mount of your soul zone upon here, obedience and freedom, submission and domination chalk and chisel to the bone, the flame of Shekinah seduces spirit within and without your psychic cyclone as age becomes an aggregate of obsession's ascensions and avalanches in cycles for you to atone, Egyptian magicians and Phoenician mariners could only dream of your pulsing fortune, what do magic rites and the mines of Ophir have to entice with compared to your throne Hiram, the builder of holy royal bastions would seek the secrets of your star storm home - J.A.B.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2016 4:11:00 AM

That's a mighty temple ... Justin, a stronghold. Like a diamond, it holds its place until perfection finds its path... I'm always happy to read your poems... Good night..Linda

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/8/2016 6:55:00 PM

Yes Linda, a temple that can withstand battle and weather in any form, a diamond that never forgets the heat of it's form...I like making you smile...I love the power of your heart my Sphinx...J.A.B.

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 4/6/2016 5:27:00 PM

As always I am filled with admiration from your words! Another beautiful write that I much enjoyed reading multiple times!!-Love Ettie

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/6/2016 8:38:00 PM

The multiplication of love is alive in the poetry of your heart Ettie...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/6/2016 11:29:00 AM

Breathtaking

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/6/2016 8:34:00 PM

You have this power beautiful Poetess...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/5/2016 9:49:00 PM

Powerful lines there too in the middle- the balance between submission and domination..the architecture of erotic love beyond the flesh, chiseled to perfection to surpass all who behold it. Definitely adding to my favorites."as age becomes an aggregate of obsession's ascensions and avalanches in cycles for you to atone"...wow..favorite line right there...who can bring to unity and harmony such chaotic glory??? You're amazing.. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/6/2016 2:01:00 AM

I love it when you highlight my lines, giving them added beauty and strength with your incomparable brilliance. Extrasensory ability emanates from the ignited heart which the Shekinah is a reference to...yes, reconciling energy, effort, awareness and age to triumph's cost. My eyes are shining for you tonight my lovely Poetess...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/5/2016 9:47:00 PM

This is fascinating, testifying and teaching poetry..Your language here is so compact and rich in this glorious composition, Justin. It crawls on the skin in the best of ways... "quarried from the chaos of your erotic emotions" Love that...and your "psychotic passions, fanatical faith"beautiful building till the thoughtful, mysterious end line...

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/6/2016 1:42:00 AM

Wow Laura, it is a thrill the way your passion and mind gets into my poetry...I love it, I need it! Sometimes we must crawl, sweat and dig to excavate the truth of our secrets, power and magic. Combining the biblical, cultural and magical viewpoints of the heart's desires was quintessential in the expression of the sacred love unique to us Laura...J.A.B.