Love Poem

Every day and night I look up to the sky, Always wondering why It couldn’t always be you and I- Sure it may seem frivolous to feel so deeply connected To someone who’s not on this planet Someone who has left what feels like long ago- 4 years later and I lament Screaming “I love you” to the sky My heart is bleeding – why? A part of me lost forever, or are you still around? My heart gets heavy when I say your name- Yet I smile- a constant game my head fights my heart memories verse reality- What I would do to restart- Cherishing every moment, good, bad Letting my heart succumb to diastole

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/15/2018 5:18:00 PM

Love is torment For the loser And 4 years can seem like yesterday In diastolic purgatory

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/11/2018 11:57:00 PM

Very lovely, Sarah. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Sarah Casey
Date: 5/24/2018 1:42:00 PM

Thank you Line

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 4/7/2018 2:13:00 PM

It s a really beautiful but sad poem, there s nothing worse than a incomplete love, it destroys you, both mentally and physically, it s when you started to get in depression, thinking of memories with your partner that shall never happen, and that s when you ll hate life and started to be in a world of dreams, always remember that tou shall be reunited with him in heaven, this life is a test, he has passed it, now it s yours time, pass it, it s well deserved poem

Sarah Casey
Date: 5/24/2018 1:42:00 PM

Thank you kindly for your words, I truly appreciate it and feel as though you understood completely what I am going through losing my beloved.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/7/2018 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful but sad poem.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/5/2018 9:14:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest Sarah. Congratulations for your win! :)

Sarah Casey
Date: 4/5/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thank you very very much :)