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Love Pain

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Love Pain

Announcing my return

Before I see you leave

Cuddled up in my thoughts

Delirious with your name

Enigmatic beauty

Feeding on my dreams

Going out of my way to give you anything

Hearing your soft voice brings...

Inklings of you in my head

Juxtapose our differences again

Killing my very heart

Loving me can be so hard?

Merging hearts, you won't do

Now all I have is an image of you

Opulence has blinded you

Prevented You from seeing ME

Quixote's madness seems to be my friend

Reminded of you in everything

Seeing my heart ripped like this

Torn like an expensive fabric

Ubiquitous pain; Love is

Venting out my frustration anyway I can

Waiting for the day you notice me

X-rays of my heart show the truth

Yearning for your love;would be too late when I reach the

Zenith of my career

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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Hi BENJAMIN-Wow!!!All I can say is once again wow this is GOOD.Clever writing,so many descriptive lines. And you have such a lovely turn of phrase eg 'cuddled up in my thoughts'.Delicious!This must surely be a competion entry.I love it very much.Thank you Luv June(Sylvia)

    Obeng Avatar Benjamin Joshua Obeng
    Date: 3/22/2012 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Sylvia..Im glad you like it. :). Maybe i should look for a competition and enter it :)
  1. Date: 3/22/2012 12:08:00 AM
    I'LL REMEMBER YOUR NAME, THE BEST I'VE RAD TODAY...

    Obeng Avatar Benjamin Joshua Obeng
    Date: 3/22/2012 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..glad you like it :)