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Love Operation

When you left me my world began to crumble My mind was racing and playing tricks on me, because everyone was looking just like you. When you left so did my heart Like an heart operation gone bad there I lay flat lining My heart stop pumping the breathe in my body no longer exist Then reality kicks in and I realize that there is no life without you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/5/2016 2:59:00 PM
Nice work!
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Date: 10/1/2016 10:00:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem! Thank you for sharing!! ( : 7!
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Date: 9/10/2016 8:56:00 AM
There is love and life just over the horizon...Nice write Shermane...Welcome to Poetry Soup
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Date: 9/7/2016 1:19:00 PM
WELL DONE, SHERMANE. LINDA
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Date: 9/6/2016 9:07:00 AM
To live by the essence of another, to breathe their air ... yes to your honesty and to your bleeding heart. Bravo! –-))
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Date: 9/3/2016 8:50:00 PM
Shermane, good write. Skat
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