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Love Notion

soft kiss lingers on
moistened and primed inner thoughts….
pulsing heart trembles

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Sensuous Senryu” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Francine Robert
July 26, 2011

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  1. Date: 7/10/2011 7:42:00 AM
    Awww... very sweet :)

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 12:59:00 AM
    so I see you got placed with this one NICELY done. It is very good, Caryl.

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 3:41:00 AM
    Congrats Caryl. So beautifully penned. Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 2:44:00 AM
    Dear Caryl, I expected to see this in the winners' circle. Congratulations, dear! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 9:03:00 PM
    Congrats! Im so happy that you such a great win. BG

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 2:37:00 PM
    Caryl, congratulations on your awesome win in Francine's contest ;) love you title!! love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 1:56:00 PM
    oohhh LOVE line three finely some sensory input!! [no need for capital "s" same rules as haiku no capitalization] and so "right" to include all this tactil info in a love verse! You go! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 1:26:00 PM
    Congrats Caryl on your spectacular win with this sensuous senryu my friend.. perfect words luv..

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 11:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 11:51:00 AM
    My congratulations onthe win in the contest of francine, Caryl

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:03:00 AM
    congrats on your 5th place win in the contest with this steamy number

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 6:26:00 PM
    Nice visual, Caryl

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 5:09:00 PM
    very sultry lines Caryl.. am sure Francine will count as one of her winners luv.. u got my vote on sexy senryu .. good luck..

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 3:35:00 PM
    Beautiful! Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 2:52:00 PM
    This is very nice. It's very geared for the way the woman feels. Which for me is really great. (I tried making mine like what a man likes. haha) Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 1:26:00 PM
    Wow! Very, very sensual, Caryl. Need a cold shower now and will send you the bill. LOL I can't write well of passion, but you this is certainly worthy of a high place in Francine's contest. Thanks for stopping by. My time here is limited by dr.'s orders to stay off the computer, but I'm so glad I saw this senryu. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 11:41:00 AM
    omg Caryl this should blow others right out of water with such passion outstanding entry for contest I too did one but not as sultry as thi thanks for sharing and for your kind comments on my poem for rambling poets contest best of luck to you my friend

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 11:21:00 AM
    I'm gad I'm not judging this contest... another perfect write and entry... Very nice.....always Michael