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Love Notes in a Bottle It came as a last meandering thought How could I know? Maybe a thousand years from now On a far away shore Would exist a lady of mystical lore Reciting sonnets of medieval tales In magic forests, dreaming of love As I love Who could feel a bond so delicate as a doves feathers A pain so strong, like a tiger wronged That to part would mean emotional low tides to come That she could feel the loneliness of night The scent of the morning dew The feeling of rain upon ones breast The smell of the rose The view of the meadows The Laughter as the children danced The plea of one whose heart bleeds The desires to capture love and yet remain free Her eyes would show her ageless beauty Her smile would hide her thoughts Wrapped deep Inside of old love letters She would sigh As I recited old prose We would hand in hand repose Knowing growing old is how it goes Alas she is but an image in my mind A thousand years till birth Or even more A fantasy, that lets me die in peace That someone could love as I loved thee You were my past, and my eternity Lovers who never took flight Broken wings, and broken borders Boundaries never crossed Kisses though we never lost On every wind swept shore I wander with the birds scouting overhead As wave upon wave of desolation slaps my head A woman is over there by the sea She but a stranger in the mist So not at all is she thee A thousand years from now On wind swept shore Will she be forlorn? Weeping for the likes of me Whispering inside, he was here but a thousand years ago Love letters telling loves desires Inside a bottle and buried in sand Alas is the ocean not made of ancient tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/9/2016 8:23:00 PM
This was magical. Loved reading it! Xo
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Date: 7/27/2016 5:18:00 AM
I would like to say that I couldn't have said it better but that would be a lie.Beautiful piece..Jai
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:07:00 PM
Beautifully written, Arthur, a lovely piece. If I were you, I'd be sorely tempted to print it off and put it in a bottle and dispatch it on the tide. Poetry in motion.... Regards, Viv
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/16/2016 10:23:00 PM
I like that!!!! Might even get a date 1000 years from now! :)
Date: 7/10/2016 4:57:00 PM
Absolutely stunning Arthur - you need to get these amazing poems into a book!:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/16/2016 10:23:00 PM
Good idea Jan!!!! Hugs
Date: 7/10/2016 10:53:00 AM
Impressive write my friend! I'm glad I stopped by this morning.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/16/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thanks Richard! Cheers!
Date: 7/10/2016 10:40:00 AM
Stunning vision so well portrayed. Reading this I was lost in visions of an older time of love felt by another in a different time but reflecting all those feelings i have had too.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/16/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Steve!
Date: 7/9/2016 5:16:00 PM
alright!.. you had me drooling, arthur; a real grand show this is.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/9/2016 11:16:00 PM
Oh la la thank you nette!!! hugs!
Date: 7/9/2016 3:12:00 PM
Next shower, I'm out there, exposing my breast. See what your poems do to me Arthur?
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 4:55:00 PM
Put your 'tuts' away Jean lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/9/2016 11:16:00 PM
LOL oh la la Jean!!!!! Us Scots are like that!!!!
Date: 7/9/2016 8:56:00 AM
What an amazing piece Arthur. Love how you brought all the elements together, love and death, future and past.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/9/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thanks Tim!
Date: 7/9/2016 4:21:00 AM
Ah, So so beautiful, so unique is your style when you write...A thousand years from now, someone will be reading your poetry, and thinking of what you have just written now..A fave Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/9/2016 11:15:00 PM
We can only hope! :) thanks Char
Date: 7/9/2016 12:05:00 AM
beautiful words my friend.....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/9/2016 11:14:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 7/8/2016 11:40:00 PM
You are remarkable, Arthur, love reading
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/9/2016 11:14:00 PM
You are so kind Eve! Thank you

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