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Love Notes

The thought of you lingers Like a song in a dream It floats like a cloud O're a delicate stream. It delights in your sweetness And repeats it's refrain Of a love everlasting That will always remain. Written on 12/1/2014

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Old Buck

Date: 5/20/2015 2:07:00 PM

Laura: I just finished reading all of your favorites (some more than once). I wanted to comment after nearly all of them but realized that wouldn't be practical. The Universe, When Families Collide, Someday, Heaven, Burning Daylight, Afflack, Punxsutawney Phil Speaks, are all great examples of what writing is meant to accomplish. Communicate feelings through words. Thank you for taking the time to write and the willingness to share these "labors" with all of us. oldbuck

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/20/2015 2:23:00 PM

Thanks so much, Buck! I feel very complimented that you took the time to read my works! I will visit your page as well. I'm just an amateur poet, but love the medium, and enjoy this poetry website! Take care and God bless :)

Anne Rutherford

Date: 12/12/2014 8:37:00 AM

Beautiful poem Laura ,Last line says it all. well done Anne

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/12/2014 12:27:00 PM

Thank you, Anne. It's a short poem, but I liked how the words flowed.