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Love Note

Your face delights me. When you flash that winsome smile I am heaven bound. Traveling this road with you; this is all I'll ever need. for contest "One Tanka-A Love Note"

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Date: 6/22/2014 12:04:00 PM
Hi Deb, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda
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Date: 6/20/2014 8:42:00 AM
Beautiful... short, sweet and to the point. Congradulations....
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Date: 6/20/2014 8:42:00 AM
A winning smile for a winning piece! Congrats for having your work featured! ^_^
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:46:00 PM
What a beautiful love note Deb..congrats on it being featured... Hugs Tim
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Date: 6/19/2013 6:35:00 PM
Aww some smiles just do it! Good luck...
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Date: 6/19/2013 4:24:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this romantic work today..Thanks for the consoling words on Gail's Blog..Sara
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Date: 6/19/2013 5:24:00 AM
Very Romantic!
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