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Love Never Fades

the morning air staggers above the lake through trees, i almost feel it kissing me my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall this emptiness is more than i can take beneath closed eyes you are all that i see yet emptiness haunts within morning's call Sandy Adams 11/01/2013 SENSES FOR A SESTET

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2017 8:46:00 PM

Sandy, where are YOU!! PLease if you see this, will you send me an email again!!! or soupmail me?

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/11/2019 7:46:00 PM

I don’t get notifications from poetry soup and it won’t let me access my mailbox only poetry comments Been absent from here about 3 years

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/17/2013 4:10:00 PM

Lovely my lady of the written word, great job on this emotional work. also know he may sleep alot but he's not a vampire lol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/10/2013 11:08:00 PM

This make me sad..and isn't that the object ..to make us feel something...congrats on your success...BG

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2013 6:41:00 PM

thank you...i thought lonely or sad would be easy emotions to convey :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/10/2013 9:24:00 AM

congrats on a fine win Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :) hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2013 6:13:00 AM

Excellent winning work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats..Sara

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:19:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and wonderful comment :)

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/9/2013 7:06:00 PM

Wonderful piece,Sandra...Congrats on your superb win in this contest....Kudos to you,pal...

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend...have a great night :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 6:13:00 PM

I've seen almost all of them now. Yours remains one of my very favorites!!! Congrats on the winners list.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2013 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Andrea... hugs :)

David Scott

Date: 11/5/2013 1:19:00 PM

I dont think it dose just like memorries love your write tahnks for your kind words on mine xxx davidscott

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/5/2013 6:06:00 PM

thank you for all your kind visits :) hugs

Karen Anglesey

Date: 11/4/2013 10:09:00 AM

Every line beautifully crafted. From " The morning air staggers...my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall---" every line is so totally alive as objects become living characters. Great work

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2013 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Karen...hugs :)

Sarai Virden

Date: 11/4/2013 2:54:00 AM

"This emptiness is more than I can take" my heart longed to give you a consoling embrace... Captivating!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2013 11:12:00 AM

thank you Sarai...hugs :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/1/2013 6:40:00 PM

I love your line, "my thoughts spiral down like leaves amidst fall". I could see everything as vividly as you described it. A beautiful, beautiful poem, Sandra! I think that I will be adding this one to my favorites!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2013 8:49:00 PM

Thank you Kelly...it was windy here the past couple days and I love watching the leaves as they spiral downward...fall is always great inspiration! hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2013 6:11:00 PM

wow, that was the sestet, huh? I think it is one of the very best I have seen. I really need to try this one out. I have been saving my time for weekend but now I have so much school work, I still fear I have no time for poetry!!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2013 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I am sure you will write a beauty for the contest...rhyme and you go well together :) hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2013 6:04:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2013 8:46:00 PM

thank you Sara...been working on the wording of that poem all week...had little me time, so would write and save it and go back to it when I could :) hugs