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Love Never Dies

An angel was crying For her prince Drenched in rain Ripped in pain Her love was pure Like sea to the shore She kept on dreaming Till her heart stopped beating And then he came Drenched in rain To meet his princess He loved in bits and pieces His heart was weeping Till it stopped beating And that was how It was always meant to be True love stories Never have happy endings

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Tom Arnone

Date: 9/16/2016 3:53:00 PM

That's not true. There are happy endings. You just haven't looked hard enough. :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:51:00 AM

Jaspreet, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jaspreet Kaur
Date: 7/19/2016 11:14:00 PM

Yes sure.. same here.. Thanks :)

Skat A

Date: 7/10/2016 3:45:00 AM

Jaspreet, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Jaspreet Kaur
Date: 7/11/2016 3:30:00 AM

Thanks!