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Love Matters

I spent my life working hard Built a house paved with slabs Garden grass with rainbow roses Show house bank account and cars A lady from the village below Walking passed my house real slow Vibrant colors big smile summer time A pleasant feeling came over me I made my way to my garden gate A force an impulse feeling brave We talked for a while I liked her style Her eyes could shine a thousand miles My heart was captured by this soul We went on a date that never ended I love you so sweet rose where love flows Love matters when the garden grows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/17/2018 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Niall, for this. I sometimes think the world is a place that could desperately do with a little more love...would'nt harm much I should'nt wonder. Cheers, mate! :) john P.s You have cheered me up no end with this lovely little tribute. :)
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Date: 4/28/2018 8:26:00 AM
I too, now feel as if on a never ending date, with my wife of 14 years.. Exceptional verses that reveal love's depths a, beauty and greatness my friend. A fav..
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:36:00 AM
A date that never ended...that should be how loves goes as it grows, enjoyed this one Niall, I think the first time reading you, will not be the last!
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:17:00 AM
Beautifully romantic. Very nice piece..
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Date: 4/23/2018 10:30:00 AM
I'm just now seeing this. The last line should be a remembered quote.
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Date: 4/12/2018 12:01:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Niall. Congrats on your most deserved win.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/12/2018 11:50:00 AM
Hi Line, thank you my friend glad you enjoyed ::)))Hugs~~~~Niall
Date: 4/7/2018 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of love.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/7/2018 4:24:00 AM
Hi Susan, thank you for comment , glad you enjoyed :) have a lovely weekend ::))))Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 4/5/2018 11:03:00 PM
This is a beautiful and heartwarming love story!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/6/2018 8:54:00 AM
Hi Becca , thank you for comment , looking forward to reading a few of your writes soon , have a lovely weekend my friend ::)))Hugs~~~~Niall
Date: 4/5/2018 6:04:00 PM
A beautiful and romantic poem! Enjoyed!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/6/2018 8:52:00 AM
Hi Kim , thank you for comment , have a lovely weekend ::))) Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 4/5/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Niall. Congratulations for your win :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/5/2018 11:44:00 AM
Hi Heidi, thank you it was a pleasure to write about love ::)) thank you for Honorable Mention ::)))))HUgs~~~Niall
Date: 4/4/2018 5:53:00 PM
what a charming poem Niall and yes love matters so so much its what many people crave but some miss out on for various reasons:-( hugs jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/5/2018 11:46:00 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you for comment yes love matters greatly ::))) Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 4/3/2018 3:55:00 PM
Awe, how sweet this is Niall. Yep, love matters ~ For love is what makes us happiest of all! Hugs and smiles :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/3/2018 4:30:00 PM
Hi Akkina , Like a good bowl of soup my friend , with the right ingredient the taste is love::)))Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 4/3/2018 10:23:00 AM
i forgot that love existed. (Van Morrison) to remember the times when love was a friend of mine. thank you.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/3/2018 4:26:00 PM
Hi Marie , So many are longing for love never to meet such a cruel faith ''''' But lots do ''''' ::)))))hugs~~~Niall
Date: 4/3/2018 4:28:00 AM
Beautiful verse Niall, and yes love is everything. Tom
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/3/2018 4:21:00 PM
Hi Tom, As the beatles said , ' money can't buy you love' thanks for comment :))~~Niall
Date: 4/3/2018 2:29:00 AM
- Love means everything here in life, Niall - A lovely poem, I enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/3/2018 4:18:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, indeed my friend everything ::)) Hugs~~Niall

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