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Love Making

Ohhhhh Electic touch shock my body awake Arched back and gutteral moans Shivers sweep my skin like circling tongues Ohhhhh scream beautiful wild sounds I can not lie still, nor think Thoughts escape me and I - I - I - ohhhhhhhh Ohhh Rapid touch Torment me till I am begging No, no, no more I can not take it I shake my head in mock protest Unable to contain, control - I have no control and ohhh Oh yes, oh yes, yes, yes yesyesyesyes oh yes, ohhhhhhhhhhhhh Toes curl and eyes squeeze shut Tingling body my face is flushed My head dizzy and I am ohhhhh Ohhhhh, ohhhhhh, I am high Inibreiated on your touch And ohhhhh, ohhhhh you have not yet Even entered my warmth with your Ohhhhhh, your touch drives me to the edge The edge of sanity, Shattering the world into a jaged blade And I forget whatever words I am about to say Ohhhhhhh, mmmmmmmmhhhhhhh, ohhhh I am blabbering I am ebullient, I am oohhhhhhhh - overflowing Quickly you slide between spread thighs Slick and wet with sweet ambrosia Hard your pelvic hits mine and it is ohhhhhhh Ohhhhh I am losing my mind Rapidly I am approaching - approaching - aahhh Ohhhhh, ohhhh, God yes, God, Head thrown back, nails pulling your hot skin closer to mine You ravage my body over and over Waves flooding my senses - so overwhelming You pound into me faster and faster Till it is impossible to tell where one ****** begins and another ends Ohhhhhhhh, my brain is numb with hot sexual desire My lips are wide with laughter, sweet bubbily giggling, Bottomless, Abyssal moans - voluptuous and husky The squeak of lascivious screams piercing the night

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Poet Tacito

Date: 10/30/2013 8:50:00 AM

You know, the 1st time I ate a plate of Lasagna, I ALMOST reacted the same way you did in this piece. =D This was a very direct & bold set of lines. There are many writings out there that are worthy of simply reading. This one needs to be heard. Almost like a monologue in a theater while the scenes are changing on stage. One can look at this writing, on the surface only, and misunderstand it. I see beyond that. There needs to be some trimming of excess words, yes. But, well done. :)

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/31/2013 8:46:00 AM

ONCE A YEAR x.x how do you survive my poor fellow! And Yay me too! Well, a month, december 2nd is my birthday :3 Happy early birthday by the way, in case I forget lol. And yeah it definitely does, you get caught up in it more. Sometimes I write about it more elusively lol but I decided to write something my man would understand haha

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/31/2013 8:41:00 AM

Ahhh, home-cooked Lasagna. Damn. I can understand the wait! But, it still borders on NO EXCUSES to wait. lol I kid...a little. I have Lasagna only once a year, on my birthday, which is less than a month away. So, my body is ready. As for your sex writings, yeah that I can understand wholly. It makes writing it out that much more real. :)

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/31/2013 7:53:00 AM

Lol I dont make lasagna, my boyfriends Mom does, I swear she makes the most godly tasting lasagna in the world but she only does it when she has a day off because it takes her a few hours, so she doesnt do it often. Id like to tell her its blasphemy haha. . .

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/31/2013 7:53:00 AM

also, I wrote subjects similar to this before, when I was younger but tbh, I hadnt had sex so it was just my imagination and I can say, a lot of times my imagination didnt live up to the real thing, so posting this now, was more real for me.

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/31/2013 7:25:00 AM

LOL awesome on all fronts. I understand. It's not easy to post something like this without worry from others, let alone write about such a attention-grabbing topic effectively. Sucks that you have to wait 2 months for Lasagna! 2 months?! Why?! Such a travesity. lol

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/30/2013 11:15:00 PM

Oh also, on the actual subject, I often write out loud, so as I was writing it I was (hopefully) quietly speaking it, those oooohhhs are delicious moans. I did feel reading it in my head that there might be too many but when I speak it out loud and I let them roll, they sound perfect ;D

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/30/2013 11:14:00 PM

So not fair, now im hungry and I wont have any orgasmic lasagna for like another two months

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/30/2013 11:13:00 PM

Lol I understand about the trimming of the excess words, but I like to write flamboyantly sometimes, I feel those extra words brings that out. And Lasagna, mmmmmh, yeah this could totally describe lasagna :3 I might just write about the mouth orgasm i get from lasagna now.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/30/2013 7:08:00 AM

Hmmmmm....sooo realistic datone can feel every bit of the intimacy. Well penned jay. Love and kisses! Bob-based on belief.

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/30/2013 11:15:00 PM

Thank you, no kisses though please.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/29/2013 10:23:00 AM

Whoa !! ,Bottomless, Abyssal moans'-indeed. Way to stretch the imagination beyond the all limits into the wild animalistic 'screams piercing the night'.

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/30/2013 11:16:00 PM

Thanks! ;) nothing better than a mind blowing orgasm, or two, three, idk whos keeping count anyway haha

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/28/2013 6:20:00 PM

I'm enchanted!# - I love how you tell it like it needs to be Jay - intimacy par excellence!!!! - you're the best I ever read :P - you even got religous - I guess Life is treatn' you pretty well :) - bold art Jay - J.A.B. %

Jay Loveless
Date: 10/30/2013 11:18:00 PM

Haha oh yes religious ;P If THATS what you wanna call it Justin haha. I was a little nervous to post something so bold but im glad I did :) and yessir, if im experiencing these kinda nights ;D lol