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Love Like the Stars

Love like the stars You are my bright star illuminating my dark If not for your love light shining I would be lost inside my self Your smile lights up my world and it twinkles, as it falls into my soul Your wonders, are a multitude like the stars connecting all the dots that make me whole You are love's constellation my true consolation My world turns and gravitates towards your love's light Your love is like the stars that give hope to lost souls on stormy seas May your love light keep shining shining down on me. John Derek Hamilton September 22,2016

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/23/2016 10:33:00 AM

oh dear John, this was so beautifully romantic...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

John Hamilton
Date: 9/23/2016 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Laura

Joseph May

Date: 9/22/2016 6:26:00 PM

Love's guiding light leads the heart....Wonderful write John

John Hamilton
Date: 9/22/2016 9:25:00 PM

Thanks Joseph

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/22/2016 1:34:00 PM

Tearful read. The beauty of your love for your wonderful wife is awesome, John. She might just give you a kiss on the cheek for this one:) I think it's excellent John. 7

John Hamilton
Date: 9/22/2016 2:19:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, she does like this one! These are easy writes as they come whenever prompted, I am truly blessed!