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Love Letters In the Sand

A huge heart and 'I Love You' are written in the sand The waves lap over them, now they are hard to understand As the tide ebbs and flows the words disappear from view I wonder who left this lovely message – such a romantic thing to do Jan Allison 13th June 2014

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Edwin Hofert

Date: 4/19/2015 6:06:00 PM

I loved this! Thank you Jan for being you. Hugs! A 7

Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/19/2015 6:39:00 PM

For a journey without end. Each day is a new beginning. And yes you undoubtedly have come a long way. And now (We) have a ways to go.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2015 6:14:00 PM

aww Edwin I am so flattered you dropped by to read my poem - I think I told you about having burst of creativity before I had bad news - this is one of 11 poems I wrote 2 days before dad was given his terminal cancer diagnosis. I think I've come a long way since I started writing just 14 months ago:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeremy Street

Date: 6/21/2014 4:35:00 PM

Precious And Few Are These Moments Sweet Two Can Share ~ Romance Isn't Dead Baby Girl! ~ Your Beauty, Attest Unto This Truth Atop Her Shores Aside, `Love's Sea:` Bravo, Dig The Poe....KLove *

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2014 4:58:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Jeremy. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/13/2014 3:58:00 PM

I used to write that in the snow for my ex when we were dating..I would leave for work earlier than her and it would be her surprise when she got out side...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 4:09:00 PM

aww bless Tim you are such a romantic and that is reflected in your writes - I am simply still learning but Darren is inspirational and my romantic writes are getting better lol Hugs Jan xxx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/13/2014 10:25:00 AM

nice one! i used to draw giant footprints in the sand to amuse my kids and this reminded me of those times...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 10:52:00 AM

Aww that too is a lovely memory Ilene thanks for dropping by. Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/13/2014 8:14:00 AM

It was me and I left it for you!! Your sweet poem made me smile this morning :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 9:12:00 AM

Aww I wish but I will hold that lovely thought in my head - shame it disappeared all too quickly. Hugs Jan xxxx Thanks for being first to comment - you and Tim are awesome for supporting us!