Love Letter

My darling you bring all your gifts
and lay them down for me to feel.
This heart expands,beats just for you.
On wings of love I find my flight.
Cinders never turned to ash
reignited every time your skin
on my skin melts me so.
Steely resolve goes out the door
as you open a window for me
and feed me the fruit of your desire.
Your face is etched on my soul
as I open my arms wide and smile.
Things I see through your eyes only
turn my thoughts to evermore.
I am filled up with the happiness of you.



for "Love Letter" contest sponsored by Heather Ober
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/31/2013 10:42:00 PM
I love it! :o)
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Date: 5/24/2013 6:46:00 PM
Deb congratulation on your well deserve win. A beautiful love letter. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/24/2013 3:50:00 PM
Wonderful love story! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 5/24/2013 1:34:00 PM
Deb, congratulations on your winning poem... a great "Love Letter" entry. always ~Linda
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Date: 5/24/2013 11:12:00 AM
many congrats Deb love xx
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:07:00 AM
Wish you congratulation on your win with this wonderful poem on love letter. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/24/2013 9:30:00 AM
Deb, this poem is bursting with feeling! The language and metaphors you chose were just perfect. Congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 4/30/2013 5:57:00 AM
This is such a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! I really loved reading this fantastic poem this morning! I really enjoyed the line, "...Your face is etched on my soul..." that is a wonderful line! What a powerful love letter, you will do well in the contest Deb, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/30/2013 2:16:00 AM
Beautiful Deb.
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