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Love Letter

I am amazed by the power of you words, They seep through my skin Like ink’s aphrodisiac, And I feel powerless to stop them, The mere thought of your hands Touching me makes Atoms explode inside my chest, As if a universe is being born, A light sweat glistens over my form As my eyes devour every syllable, My heart beats to the tune you write, With quickened breath I feel it consuming me, This sexual fantasy wax lyrical, I fail, not miserably but excitedly To control my minds dirty idiom, Where do the thoughts of lust go? I feel them cling to me Begging to be made manifest, Tonight your pen is my phallic pleasure, Take me and make me your muse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/3/2010 9:54:00 AM
great write ;))
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:45:00 AM
Love this ... a rising wave. Welcome to the soup. Drop by me anytime, you are welcome as my friend.
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Date: 9/30/2010 10:42:00 AM
very well expressed piece, nice flow to express your desires, welcome to the soup that you have no doubt spiced nicely with this verse, Cindy
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:36:00 AM
wonderful poem i really felt this just wonderful
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Date: 9/29/2010 3:40:00 AM
well well well! new to this home of creative, bleeding pens that write our hearts out? WELCOME!!!!!!
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Date: 9/28/2010 2:37:00 PM
well done, enjoyed the expression in your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:58:00 AM
This write my Poet friend goes to my Fav. list. Wow, your words flow sweetly and tenderly...Very enjoyed always Mchael
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