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Love Left Nothing To Confess

-Love left nothing to confess- On two worn crutches Our love wobbles in See her heart how cold she trembles Wheelchair romance lying unassembled The problems came when nothing said Comes home at night and lies in bed Paranoia hates those wrong assumptions Until the talking two Became the talking at In.mid air floats a hanging question A loving pair that craved destruction? A ping pong game ignoring all Enticed by a pale hipnotic ball Falls to find no safety net Falls to Earth like a Messerschmidt Take pity on this broken amputee How youve hammered and youve sickled me Sad to see how hard she also tried A coiled up spring never letting up And giving up surrendering Love left nothing to confess And having left nothing, no forwarding address

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Date: 11/22/2016 8:23:00 AM
I hate when that happens! Will confess I needed to look up Messerschmitt, added to my Breedt fix!
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 11/23/2016 12:51:00 AM
German ww11 aeroplane. They sure went down smoking as the Spitfire and Mustangs mowed them down. Thanks for the visit
Date: 11/22/2016 6:17:00 AM
constant love indeed
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 11/23/2016 12:52:00 AM
Thanks Lwazi
Date: 9/16/2016 6:13:00 AM
The last two lines are pregnant ... the whole poem is a very well written expression though ...
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/16/2016 6:57:00 AM
Thanks Probir also dor thw quick response. Theres a lot of passion in there too

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