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Love Kills

I started talking to a guy He was very upset and told me to give up He tried to take his life But I told “Never give up” We kept talking and grew really close He seemed perfect for me When we talked no one else existed But when he was upset I let him be He told me he loved me Then he turned his back like a loser He said “my ex wants me back” That’s when I knew he’d always choose her I got really upset Now it’s my turn I cried and I cut When will guys learn My emotions are fragile I’ve locked most of them away Tears roll down my cheeks as I pull the trigger I knew this would kill me someday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/13/2016 11:37:00 AM
Kayla, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/13/2016 2:10:00 AM
Dear Kayla, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/12/2016 8:14:00 PM
Kayla,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:42:00 PM
Profound poem theme Kayla. Welcome to Poetry Soup
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