Get Your Premium Membership

Love Justice

Love, a curse or a boon a query that has grown there exist a lucky few who hath tasted this feeling true Young love likens a rosebud pure and delicate, unshed canst not get enough of the other forever dying to be together hearts thudding furious pulse racing and curious earnest to explore in negligence the new world bathed in brilliance like a bud eager to bloom and bee to devour (Love is justified) Time flies in dalliance love blooming with experience with it comes trust and assurance a must here and then they falter unable to alter bud devoid of the dew fragrance fading in lieu (Is love justified?) The rose now in full bloom as love on its way to doom arduous is the test of love withering away if not conveyed chiding and belittling the other love start its decline and wither It has happened time and again repeating itself in vain alas! In the minds of those the answer still remain!!! © Nadiya (18 Jan '15) *Honorable Mention on 25 Jan 2015 in the contest 'Love justice' by Justin Bordner.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/16/2015 12:16:00 PM
I am in love with your lines... This is a great piece and I hope to spend more time on your other works. Thank you for the incredible share
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 2/16/2015 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Funom... i enjoy reading you writes as well... your feedbacks are always welcom... nad!
Date: 1/26/2015 12:36:00 PM
Excellent write with beautiful imagery - no wonder it is a winner! Congratulations, my friend! Pandita.
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 1/26/2015 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Pandita for your pleasing words... appreciate your visit... love nad!
Date: 1/25/2015 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations Nadi over your winning.Well done.Walk more long. -Safa
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 1/25/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Muhammad...appreciate your comment and visit.
Date: 1/25/2015 9:08:00 AM
"Love's Labor's Lost!" You've traced the tale of love. With all its pitfalls and heartaches, it's still worth it-withered or in full bloom! Nice write.
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 1/25/2015 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Malik for taking time to visit, read and comment on my poem... pleased that you have deduced what i had in mind.
Date: 1/25/2015 2:29:00 AM
Congratulation on your HM. Love Nad>rajat
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 1/25/2015 6:08:00 AM
Thank you friend
Date: 1/25/2015 12:10:00 AM
Hi Nadiya, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 1/25/2015 6:07:00 AM
Thank you friend
Date: 1/19/2015 9:13:00 PM
So beautiful and romantic, and being a romantic I will say love only withers when we stop to water, and how easily love is regained when we tend back to the garden of devotion!
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 1/20/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thank you Arthur... your comments are a pleasure to read... agree with you that love needs constant tending and attention... nad!
Date: 1/19/2015 7:24:00 PM
This is an excellent entry for Justin's contest. I suspect he will be pleased.
Login to Reply
Relish Avatar
Poesy Relish
Date: 1/20/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thank you Richard... pleased to know that my entry is worth for the competition... nad!

Book: Shattered Sighs