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i love it when you hold me tell me the cuties things when you hold me at nigh i feel light as a feather when you say i love you i turn red and hide my face i feel so in love words that you just say open mind gentle and soft you hold my heart the beats seem to count no blood drips no tears no wounds just love flowing head to toes I’m bare naked half way you touch me softly sweat drips lift me teach me but hold me play ruff ones when the nigh is blue and the sky is clam the moon shines the bed moves i love you but love it lets do it

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Date: 2/13/2016 10:57:00 PM
luis, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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