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Love Is More- Valentine Day Limerick

They say love comes in a gush I don’t believe all that mush Not just a feeling… Love is believing There’s more to it than a rush Your loved one gives you goose bumps You see curves instead of lumps Your heart palpitates And sex satiates Your life is coming up trumps! But Love’s a decision too When feelings get old not new You think of your vow Fulfill it somehow And resolve to stick like glue So when there are angry darts Or when there are broken hearts You think of that glow You give love a go And all the sorrow departs Today is Valentine’s Day Tease and please…now don’t delay Revive that hot spark Make love in the dark Love’s the sweetest game to play. Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/14/2013 4:56:00 PM
I liked it very much, playful and yet with an important message. So many people think of love as a feeling when in fact it is a verb, we actively participate and when we are loved and love someone all the feelings are the byproduct of love.
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Date: 2/14/2013 1:32:00 PM
True love incompasses all the good and all the bad..Enjoyed reading your humor today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/14/2013 9:33:00 AM
Eileen I love the humor you put in your Valentine's Limerick. Put a laugh in my breath and a smile on my face. I've been married for 45 years. I can relate to your write. Happy Valentine's Day my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:11:00 AM
Nice thoughts
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Date: 2/14/2013 7:14:00 AM
Very good love poem in this Limerick form!Great job as it is not very easy to write Limericks!I love this new Avatar of you.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2013 7:19:00 AM
Thanks, Kash...Sweet of you! That's my hubby! Have a great Valentine Day!
Date: 2/14/2013 6:01:00 AM
Humorous? Maybe, yet, deep and true to the bone! Loved it and my appreciation is shown with top mark! Have a wonderful V day and do it not only in the dark but even in the day! Ha-ha! Thank you!
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