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Love Is Like

Love is like wine Bittersweet, Love enough to make me sick Rip my heart out Its yours now Be gentle. Love is like a sickness Once you got it, it must run it's course. Teasing your emotions, Butterflies in my stomach Rid me of it. Love is like a debt so much at first its more than enough unaware its eroding your heart breaking it down into nothing, left with emptiness. love is like a mad dog chasing cars in the street such a rush is the run such a pain is the hit, bones broken left in the street, only to start over. love is like a drug, the first trip is the best, high as a kite. dependency settles in, isn't doing what it did. sweating and shivering time to come down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/30/2009 3:27:00 PM
I can tell that you have experienced some varied things in your life. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2009 7:29:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jon. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2009 3:42:00 PM
I posted a new poem.It's called life is to short.check it out.It's a positive one.Don't know where it came from it just came to me. Tell me what you think.
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Date: 11/25/2009 7:18:00 PM
Very Nice poem....enjoyed...Marty... Happy Thanksgiving...
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Date: 11/25/2009 6:36:00 PM
You define love creatively, it is such a complex feeling sometime is a pain but what unlucky some people are to live their lives without it...Happy Thanksgiving, Jon. Love, Iolanda
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