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Love Is Blind

It all started one day When she was down by the bay She sat with her friends Unknowing their friendship was about to come to an end Because right then She looked around the ben And saw the boy The Boy! Yes it was the boy He was about to put an end to all their joy It started with the wink of an eye And ended with a goodbye Because while the boy and the girl stayed together The girls started to experience some bad weather Because she started to date this boy The friends tried to save her But she was caught in a blur Unknowing of the mistakes she was making She let him pressure her even though she was breaking However she really did not care She just needed her love there It all happened because of the boy She started to become distant Acting like her friends were nonexistent All she cared about now was him She was drowning - she forgot how to swim She forget how to say no She just kept getting hit with painful blows Because she didn’t care what he did - she just needed her love, no matter how many times she was hit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/10/2016 11:05:00 PM
Snowkissed Sugar, Congratulations on your "Cliche" win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/8/2016 3:48:00 AM
Congrats on ur very wonderful win with this amazing write Cassie..
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Date: 3/30/2016 8:20:00 PM
Cassie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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