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Love Is a Beautiful Gift

Love is a beautiful gift.... When your lips touch on my lips, then I wake up When your hair fall on my face, then I feel tickle When your head on my chest, then I find peace When your arms around me, then I promise my love When your love fall on me then I take care of you When your eyes close then I make you happy When you carry my heart then I feel I am yours When I carry your soul then I feel you are mine When I write a poem then I think you are a poem When you read my poem, then I feel your warm When the world around me then I see no where When you are around me then I am somewhere When you are close to me then our love is melt When you are far away then our love turns tears Love gives me the best when I love you and its a beautiful gift that never ends Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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Date: 5/5/2013 1:56:00 AM
Amazing sharing dear friend poet Ravi... so enjoyed.. thank you for your dropping by <3 :)
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Date: 5/2/2013 3:39:00 PM
I agree with you. It is a gift. something that you can not buy. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 4/30/2013 3:18:00 AM
That it is, my friend. It is clear you know some things about love. Cherish that gift forevermore! As if i NEED to say ity, right? Nice poem! I enjoyed reading it a lot. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/25/2013 4:48:00 PM
Oh, I really like this kind of poem. It's a style I once taught to some students of mine: to being each line the same.we had been learning about spring and they wrote poems in which each line began In spring. ..... Very lovely.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/30/2013 12:08:00 AM
Thanks for your comment
Date: 4/24/2013 7:51:00 AM
Very expressive work that some lovely lady enjoyed reading I am sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:08:00 AM
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:08:00 AM
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Date: 4/24/2013 3:27:00 AM
Yes .... this is the Ravi I "know" ..... full of delightful and loving words! (I was a little worried at the first one you posted) - This is really beautifully Ravi!! - Wishing you all the best, have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:08:00 AM
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/24/2013 4:53:00 AM
Thanks Anne. Appreciated.

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