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Love In the Making

Your laugh, your glittering eyes, lips slightly parted warm breath from flared nostrils, the rhythm of your heart, silky skin sweetly perfumed, and ghostly caresses from cultured hands. Is that your recipe for our love? A luscious dinner fit for a king? A priceless princess sacrificed on the altar of love? All around the smell of intoxicating incense increases my sensation of being on a lofty cloud experiencing a much-desired dream that has now come true. Stars glitter, night surrounds, in the dark, I hear your loving whispers, espy your feline eyes glittering in the nebulous mist, feel you next to me Ecstasy. My love is now complete.

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Date: 12/11/2022 1:20:00 PM
Not sure how missed this beautiful poem Victor, It is definitely a favorite. So sensuial so inviting, so overpoweringly delightful.
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Date: 11/30/2022 2:58:00 AM
Passionate lines penned. You must have a new girlfriend about whom you are thinking. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2022 7:20:00 AM
- A poem that the heart understands ... beautiful, my friend Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 11/28/2022 12:38:00 AM
Very romantic, Victor:)
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Date: 11/27/2022 2:03:00 PM
Very sensual and romantic Victor. Tom
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Date: 11/27/2022 1:17:00 PM
A luscious dinner fit for a king? A priceless princess sacrificed on the altar of love? Very interesting.
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Date: 11/27/2022 12:03:00 PM
"Stars glitter, night surrounds, in the dark, I hear your loving whispers, espy your feline eyes glittering in the nebulous mist, feel you next to me Ecstasy. My love is now complete." Very intense, beautiful! Poetry does not get better. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 11/27/2022 11:57:00 AM
Pleasantly romantic, with beautiful images. :)
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Date: 11/27/2022 10:44:00 AM
Sensuous and beautiful, Victor.
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Date: 11/27/2022 9:14:00 AM
Love, have had , has lost, will find again. Blessings my friend
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Date: 11/27/2022 8:36:00 AM
A charming verse adorned in voice of love, Victor. Enjoyed the sound of your romantic rhythms.
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Date: 11/27/2022 7:17:00 AM
These are sensual thoughts! A compelling story.
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Date: 11/27/2022 5:23:00 AM
"in the dark, I hear your loving whispers, espy your feline eyes glittering in the nebulous mist".... Very sensuous descriptions ! A gripping tale of love!
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