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Love In the Fog

LOVE IN THE FOG Gardens will bloom and leaves will fall Hearts will be quickened –fog or snow Love beckons once its sudden call.... Through midnight fog a stark black crow Sought shoulders of a man well-horsed. Hearts will be quickened –fog or snow A woman parted highland gorse She walked with purpose—mind was set-- Sought shoulders of a man well-horsed. As Fate would have it their eyes met He smiled --reached down-- her hand kissed light She walked with purpose—mind was set-- Plucked from the road—sped out of sight. Her bonnet tossed mid roadside grass--- He smiled --reached down-- her hand kissed light Townsfolk wonder each time they pass Gardens will bloom and leaves will fall Her bonnet tossed mid roadside grass--- Love beckons once its sudden call.... Who of us dares Fly into the night On love’s bold far-eyed steed? 1/2/13

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Date: 1/6/2013 7:33:00 PM
Great poem! Bravo!
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:12:00 AM
i would say my poem is the anti-your poem...ignore all or most of my soupmail because now i get it...you can write girl..this poem THIS IS SIMPLY GORGEOUS thanks for commenint on my poem "trust or Thrust PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
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Date: 1/6/2013 7:44:00 AM
i would say my poem is the anti-your poem...ignore all or most of my soupmail because now i get it...you can write girl..this poem THIS IS SIMPLY GORGEOUS thanks for commenint on my poem "trust or Thrust PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
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Date: 1/5/2013 6:45:00 PM
hard form calling for the woven repetition of certain lines...not easy to understand the pattern..lovely content. Light & Love
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 1/5/2013 10:26:00 PM
whoops...fixed was just using rhyme scheme--forgot about repetition--don't use this form often.
Date: 1/5/2013 1:29:00 PM
just love this one, Vic
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Date: 1/4/2013 3:20:00 PM
Victoria, this is such a well done piece. Amidst the gloom that nature sometimes gives us, she has a trick up her sleeve in the form of new love. Also, I enjoyed the way it was written. Dave
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Date: 1/4/2013 8:04:00 AM
Soup mail
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Date: 1/4/2013 2:06:00 AM
I like it.
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