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Love In the Clouds

If mountains had hearts, will they flirt with the flippant clouds? (a one-liner poem)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 1:56:00 PM
lovely poem. LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2015 6:36:00 PM
RAVINDRAN, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 12/7/2015 4:19:00 PM
Beautiful, beautiful imagery created here! Congrats for your placement Ravindran! ;-)
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/8/2015 2:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot Teddy
Date: 12/6/2015 12:46:00 AM
nice think sir
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/6/2015 12:51:00 AM
Thanks Manu
Date: 12/5/2015 10:16:00 PM
This is cute, Ravindran! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/6/2015 12:51:00 AM
Thank you, Kim
Date: 12/5/2015 9:16:00 PM
I live and love in the mountains. I so love your one line. I wrote it in a card and placed beside my bed. Congrats on your win.
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/6/2015 12:50:00 AM
Oh, I'm flattered... Thank you.
Date: 12/5/2015 6:43:00 PM
cute one. Loved the alliteration at the end.
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/6/2015 12:50:00 AM
Oh, yeah. Thank you. It just sort of clicked!
Date: 12/5/2015 6:01:00 PM
Congratulations Ravindran.
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/6/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Nayda
Date: 12/5/2015 12:19:00 PM
lovely poem congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/6/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Jan. Btw, how do I know I'm the winner?
Date: 12/5/2015 12:07:00 PM
Ravindran.. ..Lovely win.... Love Skat
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/6/2015 12:27:00 AM
A very funny question. How do I know I'm the winner? I'm quite bemused here (help me!)
Date: 12/5/2015 9:06:00 AM
Cute, congrats!
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/5/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Ed
Date: 12/5/2015 7:47:00 AM
I enjoyed your one liner, well done.
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/5/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Casarah
Date: 12/4/2015 8:44:00 AM
this is a good one!! -lu *smiles*
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/4/2015 12:01:00 PM
Thank you

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