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Love In Spring

Love in Spring (10-Word Challenge)
Steal away with me my Beloved One, to rendezvous under a radiant sapphire sky, where brown skylarks sweetly sing their incessant songs in dulcet harmony, as they fly over idyllic, rolling meadows, welcoming spring and young lovers.
There at the old hollow, upon a soft bed, freshly spread with a plethora of tender, forest green ferns, wait I impatiently to share delightful moments of unbridled felicity, as our hearts and bodies sensuously entwine, spinning our own chrysalis of love.
Though this rhapsodic bliss may seem evanescent, titillating memories of this exquisite tryst, will ever invade our dreams, and like a mystical spring talisman, sustain our hearts… for a lifetime.
01-24-2016 10-Word Challenge by the Silent One plethora - evanescent - felicity - rhapsodic - idyllic dulcet - chrysalis - radiant - sapphire - talisman

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Date: 4/12/2016 9:35:00 PM
Pandita this poem of yours made me comfortable, well written.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/13/2016 4:15:00 PM
Hi Lara, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece! Thank you so much for your kind words and compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 2/25/2016 9:34:00 AM
hello friend... Longest time! Where have you been? This is beautiful and creative. Thank you so much for this lovely and useful share....
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Date: 2/28/2016 9:33:00 AM
Dear Funom, thank you so very much for your wonderful praises, and support! I have been off the grid for a while as I have so many work obligations that require my attention. But I'll try to get back in the swing of things real soon! Best wishes. Pandita
Date: 2/6/2016 4:38:00 AM
You have created a wonderful poem with the these challeging words Pandita.#7
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/7/2016 1:18:00 PM
Thank you my dear Connie, for your sweet response and high score! While it took a little time for me to wrap my mind around the words, I'm glad that I took a shot at it! All the best for the upcoming week! Pandita
Date: 2/3/2016 1:39:00 PM
You have done an excellent job using these difficult words, Pandita! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:47:00 AM
Hi Sandra, I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita
Date: 2/1/2016 12:27:00 PM
Hello Pandita, I think this Is well put together, with the right touch of rich imagery, that connects to the emotions and the 10 words to tie in the intellect.' Hope you get good spot with this.!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/1/2016 3:13:00 PM
Hi Joe, I am so happy to stopped by and that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your continued support, my friend! Pandita
Date: 1/28/2016 6:45:00 PM
this is really wonderful to read. Those words shimmer with beauty in your poem.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/29/2016 2:25:00 PM
Hi Andie, I am so delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you my dear friend for your kind words of praise! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Date: 1/24/2016 4:20:00 PM
It's getting hot in here. Whew! I do love the poem. It is A7
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/24/2016 7:27:00 PM
:-) - Hehehehe - Hi Daniel, thank you for stopping by with your lovely comments/compliments and high score which I truly appreciate! Have a great week aahead, my friend! Pandita
Date: 1/24/2016 2:58:00 PM
Oh! What an exciting romantic piece you so artfully penned! I love how you beautifully brought together the ten words in such a cohesive, creative manner! Very lovely and a 7! Kika
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/24/2016 3:00:00 PM
Hi Kika, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece! Thank you so much for your kind words and high score! Warm regards. Pandita
Date: 1/24/2016 2:25:00 PM
This is a beautiful reaction to S-1's challenge, Pandita!! Wish I could have had a go at it, but I'm just too busy at the moment. #7 Warm regards // paul
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/24/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, for your wonderful response! It took a little time for me to wrap my mind around the words but I am glad I was able to take a shot at it! All the best for the upcoming week! Pandita

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