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Love In Smoke

Fire pit is ablaze. Flame flickering, smoke billows. Your image dances.

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/27/2013 2:59:00 PM

I enjoyed the fantastic imagery of the smoky dancing image... very well done. Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:39:00 PM

I love that last line here. BIG congrats for your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 2:37:00 PM

Dancing to the flickering flames..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 12:39:00 PM

This is very nice...congratulations

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 11:36:00 AM

Love this Adam.Congrats on your win.

Adam Hapworth

Date: 7/22/2013 6:47:00 AM

Thank you all. Its always a pleasure to be recognized. I have a wonderful muse in my wife to thank :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:39:00 AM

Adam congrats on your excellent win. Warm a smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:08:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality, Adam ! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:00:00 PM

Adam :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 7/14/2013 1:18:00 PM

Wow, a real haiku in spirit. Bravo!

Adam Hapworth
Date: 7/14/2013 3:00:00 PM

I'm getting better ;) Thanks.