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Love In Perfection

Love and affection makes the world turn babe, to go with out love, is, maybe is a cold grey glove, drab ending of days no direction, no point in being somebodies slave which makes sad dull in perfection. find and connect the one perfect love, to give a sad life some connection. Don (I remember some old love movie where it went from colour to black n white on the Broken heart part}

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/21/2017 6:23:00 PM

Hello Don I just read your poem. Love in Perfection. I enjoyed this poem. Nice to meet you.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/11/2016 7:38:00 PM

I suppose my perfect love is poetry. You've done an excellent job with your own here! Best wishes, I'll behave now. Keep well, Mikki :)

Don Johnson
Date: 9/11/2016 9:27:00 PM

I have thought I had it but was sadly mistaken, I did learn a few lessons bad Karmic i suppose, we get our just deserts over time.

Don Johnson

Date: 9/10/2016 4:40:00 PM

Yes Keith i agree, a fella should read it a few times to get it right. First drafts hey:} do i mean is is hehe

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/10/2016 1:29:00 PM

I hope that one will hook up with his actual true love, and quit making fraudulent attempts with my muse. Muses are temperamental; mine doesn't the company of ones who will try to own her, nor name her as their own.:( I joined the Soup in 2005, never needing his help or advice. Keep well, best wishes, Mikki :)

Don Johnson
Date: 9/10/2016 4:52:00 PM

Well babe seek to find the cute behind. And its out there never fret . Ask the great unwashed subconcious community to bring you the required lover and it will appear. So I'll slap you on the bottom and see you later dear:}

Keith Logan

Date: 9/10/2016 6:04:00 AM

Good poem, great premise. typo: second line is is One point that might be worth consideration, grey in line two followed almost immediately by grey in line three. Maybe consider something like dark for the first occurrence.