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Love implodes I see only the brightness and beauty Of her eyes Golden hairs, I am envious to caress her sun rays As I discover the universe, Thrusting into the abscess of loves black hole The void of loves creation begins again Notes: This poem was inspired by a recent poem here in soup, as a kinda contest, guess who that poet and poem is, and win first prize, if 100 guess the right answer, guess what, thats 100 first prizes!!!!!

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/31/2016 12:11:00 PM

Ah....and I was hoping it was me! ;) Lovely write, my dear....I like the passionate, sensual kind. Please, check your inbox! hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/5/2016 11:13:00 PM

As the Goddess of romance how could one even hope for the unattainable! Thank you so much kind heart! Hugs!

Funom Makama

Date: 5/12/2016 12:02:00 PM

Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/5/2016 11:12:00 PM

Thank you Funom, inspired by Paris!

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/6/2016 4:49:00 PM

I have no idea who, but if she inspired this write, you have honored her beyond measure! Excellent write Sir!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/5/2016 10:41:00 PM

It was the statue, in an undisclosed location in Paris! Thank you Walter.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/6/2016 1:40:00 PM

I am going to say Andrea, but I actually don't know for sure. Beautifully written Arthur! #7 ; )

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/7/2016 12:09:00 AM

Close!!! Casarah! Thanks Hugs!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 5/6/2016 11:40:00 AM

I'm not guessing unless I know the prize. For all we know the prize could be one free week of cleaning the Vaso Estate....All I know is this is a terrific poem : )

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/7/2016 12:08:00 AM

Actually you were pretty close, it was a week cleaning at your place!!! :)

The Grahamburglar

Date: 5/6/2016 9:49:00 AM

I also have no idea about who or what inspired this, but wanted to drop in to tell you I really enjoyed this write. Well done, Sir. -G

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/7/2016 12:09:00 AM

Very nice of you, It was Casarah's recent Haiku that inspired this!!!

Meg Anderson

Date: 5/6/2016 8:26:00 AM

lovely! but I have no idea who the poem was inspired by. It was a nicely written poem in all aspects!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/7/2016 12:07:00 AM

Thanks Meg! So sweet of you!