Love Hurts

love puts a spring in every step, but painful is if you been left, depressing is the rain:> black n white the picture stain, an round n round again, im wishing i was dead, but sandgoanna aint fed? so i willl remain, a Pelican of brain, poor ole bird brain Fred? Don Johnson

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Therese Bacha

Date: 9/30/2014 12:15:00 PM

Hello dear Dan, yes its me, been gone for a while, trying to come back. You write such deep deep poems, reading them, is who you were at the same time you wrote, and what were you feeling in your depth, also at the same moment you wrote this beautiful sad poem. I love it, as I feel the same way like you do. Living day by day, is not easy. Especially being an actor, if I remember well. Keep writing my friend. Hugs Terry xoxo