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Love Given

I don't give you my love, like a toy to be discarded; but more like a treasure, to be very fondly regarded; not to be passed all around, as though a sweet tart; but rather to be held close, become part of your heart; should never be exploited, and used for personal gain; but in your heart and mind, it should always remain; should be your bodies blood, to always keep you living, the reason you give to me, the love you are giving.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/26/2011 5:56:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem today. Keep up the beautiful work! Always, Laura
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Ronald Karzmarczyk
Date: 12/26/2011 6:13:00 PM
thank-you,very much appreciated. love Ron
Date: 12/26/2011 4:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Good rhyming and flow to your work..Sara
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Ronald Karzmarczyk
Date: 12/26/2011 5:13:00 PM
thank-you much, comments appreciated. love Ron

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