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Love Forever

Love forever In my dreams you always will remain alive, Passionate longings shall also thrive, As I take a deep last breath, Blossoming Aldreth, Flashes fast, Death, Leaves aghast, Tranquillise the wrath, Remember Shakespeare's Mcbeth, Where till eternity souls survive, In my dreams you always will remain alive ! Written Feb 17th, 2015 For Andrea's contest Awarded 5th place win

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Date: 3/7/2015 1:04:00 AM
Enchanting world of dreams..........lovely!!
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:10:00 PM
Nice win. SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 8:18:00 PM
Wonderful write, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, a 7 congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Date: 2/23/2015 6:54:00 PM
Such a nice "love forever" poem, written in such a difficult form, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/24/2015 12:59:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sandra!
Date: 2/23/2015 8:12:00 AM
Great write, congratulations!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/24/2015 12:58:00 AM
Thanks for ur kind visit and words Richard!
Date: 2/23/2015 7:44:00 AM
Oh so nicely done! Unique and beautiful, grats on your win~
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/24/2015 12:57:00 AM
Thnx for ur kind visit n words Casarah!
Date: 2/23/2015 2:03:00 AM
beautifully penned - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/24/2015 12:56:00 AM
Thnx a lot Jan !
Date: 2/23/2015 12:30:00 AM
Dr. Upma. Are you from England? I was thinking whoever wrote this one would have to be an English lover of Shakespeare! I even looked up Aldreth to see what it was. Does it have some importance to Shakespeare? This was a most interesting poem! Congrats for your win in my contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/24/2015 12:55:00 AM
Glad that u liked Andrea! I am from India my dear,, It just occured to me n i used that for rhyming,, certainly I m a great fan of Shakespeare ! Appreciate your words of encouragement,, thanks //upma//
Date: 2/17/2015 6:54:00 PM
Isn't that the way of love..always alive in our dreams..should do well good luck
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/18/2015 4:02:00 AM
Appreciate your visit Frederic,, thanks a lot!
Date: 2/17/2015 11:04:00 AM
Great write Upma. Love
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/18/2015 4:01:00 AM
Thanks Rajat !

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