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Love Fever

Adrift on this river of fire A love that is built to inspire Brings me to my knees Has me begging please To relieve my raging desire for contest"Unspeakable Love" sponsored by Adeleke Adeite

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/6/2011 2:43:00 AM
Interesting use of the Limerick format. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/19/2011 3:22:00 PM
a passionatable write, very dearing to your soul the love has you, enjoyed your write Deb,..p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2011 9:46:00 AM
This is a different kind of limerick. No humor here, but quite a bit of sultry descriptiveness. Adeleke should like this one.
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