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Love Crush

I begin with an 'Hi there' Expensive they say is your heart Nobody's worth on your part Stingy of the feeling of ardor A heart's passion to adore I have got an idea You seek a love void of pain A pride of beauty obtain No love without it's heat For without it, it's incomplete Should I hide here? The wilderness of my soul Where reared the hate owl Pray I, that your heart accept My earnest intention attempt The day I 'll dare To say 'Hi dear'.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/30/2013 11:11:00 AM
Neat progression from life to love in 17 talent filled lines... Congrats on a fine entry... Jake
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:50:00 PM
Goodness, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2013 8:38:00 AM
- Sweet love poem,G.L.!!!!! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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